I love this picture.. I think it's adorable, but I will just point out... not that it annoys me at all.. but if the umbrella is resting on her shoulder and going behind her head.. it should be on an angle where u can see the inside of umbrella a little bit, and i think her stomach comes in 2 quickly to connect to her legs, making it connect to her hips/legs a bit lower might make her look fatter... but it is more technically correct... but thats my opinion
over all I love this picture .. hence why it's in my favourites..
aw man you're right about that. But I wasn't really wanting to draw the inside of the umbrella, ah well, screw logic in this picture I wanted her to look a bit chubby, I guess the hips are a bit..'round'? Thanks so much for pointing those out
I mean, don't change it on my account or anything, Just letting you know, I love it the way it is, just friendly constructive criticism, you are a much better artist than I am , I have a few questions... What program did you use and all that jazz( u know standard question how long it took and what not), I mostly Dabble in Vectors, and I am still getting better. anyway.
I wasn't going to change it, what I draw will stay like that and I will hopefully improve and remember the criticism I received from others, but then again I'll always screwing with anatomy and proportions without even knowing and besides I don't have the Psd file anymore there is no way I'm going to fix it without even ruining it Programs I use Photoshop and SAI, but mostly SAI cause its a lot, um I'd like to say 'lighter' I think. vector's good I kinda got irritated with it sometimes.
I know how u feel about the vectors, it takes a long time to do them properly, im looking into getting a copy of photoshop, I wouldn't feel right releasing art on a Pirated version, but thats just me ...