Productivity has fallen to 20% and injuries have quadrupled since we made the decree that ponies must sleep in the day and work at night. I am always willing to give your suggestions the benefit of the doubt, sister, but I am afraid this one just isn't going to work.
I like how you did celestias hairjust pink in this. Cuz if you think about it. Lunas mane didnt get sparkley until after she'd gotten older. In this both of them are still relatively young. It just works.